So I was thinking
The other day
That maybe the reason why
I’m so awkward flusterd in everything I say
Is that I’m worried I won’t have enough time
To tell you everything that
I want to.
Can you tell me why does a rhyme please you
So much?
I’d like to know because my ear too, is soothed by its
Soft touch
Yet my mind lies bereft half the time for a word that fits,
and its never bothered me before,
So I wonder why, why do I feel compelled this time
To find the perfectly shaped rhyme
Words fly: crime, lime, prime
On a roll now, following down this line
But wait, stop.
I don’t want to sound juvenile.
Shall I sacrifice my meaning for that cleaner sound?
Its not either or I hear you shout,
But I don’t believe you, someone has to lose
And I search for a way out
Hurrying, I stumble over the laces of my shoes
B
To talk
To tease, sometimes to play,
To sit with one another for so many hours
To laugh, joke,
eat together, complain in lazy companionship,
Share each other’s pain
To lean, to fall together
To pull each other up
To hold on, tight,
knowing nothing could pull nearly so hard until
Nothing does.
Nothing
Not a glimmer, no burning ember, remains
No more than a flicker of recognition
all that’s left to see, to feel
Neither passionate rage nor cold fury
but sharper, and more devastating than either is
just this:
the absence of warmth
friendship lost.
There will come a day
When they sit in wonder
Of all this disaster and dissarray
Civilization
and say
'the head was a little too big on that one, wasn't it?'
without using all the usual clichés
there's something I intend to say
these lines never used to rhyme
it's strange,
what changes over time
and what doesn't
like a tug on my eyes
I admit to surprise
That what should be long-gone
still lingers
like a train in the distance
a dot of light piercing the night
Believe that
she could pull me
across the sea
what would you say
if I told you
that four days had sailed
through the waves and constraints
of four years
clear as clay
fainter then these golden rays?
Enough to
pull eyes off a page
stare vacantly for a while
wondering,
too much like a child
The rain started
last night
in the hours when the dogs
are all quiet, the moon spirits have settled
the hours when you wouldn't hear anything because
no one
would be awake enough to hear
so came the rain
in those unfortunate few hours
unattended, unwelcomed
in a silent dark rush
the first glimpse of morning was without light
unless the silver gray of the sky unfolding
can be called such
they danced vengefully upon a dazed, half-conscious earth
a flood indignant,
that for a few whole hours
no one could have cared
I throb in every molecule
pulsing waves of sound
bodies shake with the rhythm
frantic then slow
eyes roll, close
this is the face of revelry
yet I feel
nothing
Here comes another heart-touching
story about those terrible things happening over there
and the Children in Africa
and you should tear up
really you must find yourself moved
Because
you live so comfortably
with the smallest list of reasons to be unhappy
so naturally you need to hear tales of misery
to feel something different
I think
If I
Was one of those children over there in Africa
I'd prefer happy stories all the time, though
I guess I'll never know
So I was thinking
The other day
That maybe the reason why
I’m so awkward flusterd in everything I say
Is that I’m worried I won’t have enough time
To tell you everything that
I want to.
Can you tell me why does a rhyme please you
So much?
I’d like to know because my ear too, is soothed by its
Soft touch
Yet my mind lies bereft half the time for a word that fits,
and its never bothered me before,
So I wonder why, why do I feel compelled this time
To find the perfectly shaped rhyme
Words fly: crime, lime, prime
On a roll now, following down this line
But wait, stop.
I don’t want to sound juvenile.
Shall I sacrifice my meaning for that cleaner sound?
Its not either or I hear you shout,
But I don’t believe you, someone has to lose
And I search for a way out
Hurrying, I stumble over the laces of my shoes
B
To talk
To tease, sometimes to play,
To sit with one another for so many hours
To laugh, joke,
eat together, complain in lazy companionship,
Share each other’s pain
To lean, to fall together
To pull each other up
To hold on, tight,
knowing nothing could pull nearly so hard until
Nothing does.
Nothing
Not a glimmer, no burning ember, remains
No more than a flicker of recognition
all that’s left to see, to feel
Neither passionate rage nor cold fury
but sharper, and more devastating than either is
just this:
the absence of warmth
friendship lost.
There will come a day
When they sit in wonder
Of all this disaster and dissarray
Civilization
and say
'the head was a little too big on that one, wasn't it?'
without using all the usual clichés
there's something I intend to say
these lines never used to rhyme
it's strange,
what changes over time
and what doesn't
like a tug on my eyes
I admit to surprise
That what should be long-gone
still lingers
like a train in the distance
a dot of light piercing the night
Believe that
she could pull me
across the sea
what would you say
if I told you
that four days had sailed
through the waves and constraints
of four years
clear as clay
fainter then these golden rays?
Enough to
pull eyes off a page
stare vacantly for a while
wondering,
too much like a child
The rain started
last night
in the hours when the dogs
are all quiet, the moon spirits have settled
the hours when you wouldn't hear anything because
no one
would be awake enough to hear
so came the rain
in those unfortunate few hours
unattended, unwelcomed
in a silent dark rush
the first glimpse of morning was without light
unless the silver gray of the sky unfolding
can be called such
they danced vengefully upon a dazed, half-conscious earth
a flood indignant,
that for a few whole hours
no one could have cared
I throb in every molecule
pulsing waves of sound
bodies shake with the rhythm
frantic then slow
eyes roll, close
this is the face of revelry
yet I feel
nothing
Here comes another heart-touching
story about those terrible things happening over there
and the Children in Africa
and you should tear up
really you must find yourself moved
Because
you live so comfortably
with the smallest list of reasons to be unhappy
so naturally you need to hear tales of misery
to feel something different
I think
If I
Was one of those children over there in Africa
I'd prefer happy stories all the time, though
I guess I'll never know
leaking roofs and reading glasses by Unseen-wonder, literature
Literature
leaking roofs and reading glasses
you wrote essays about revolutions and dictatorships,
whilst I tried to read you poetry about night drives through Italy.
we worked together, yet separate.
you on your numbers, and me on my language
until we grew bored of library stacks
and interested in each other.
the winter wove us together until I collected my days
just to share them with you.
I teased you about leaking roofs and routines,
you made fun of my cold feet and reading glasses
until we thought we were fluent in each other.
I noticed you sneaking glances as you changed gear
though we never would have admitted to it.
speedometers drop, and scenery changes, yet
the
I can still taste smoke and it's getting old now.
older than china tea cups and laddered tights and --
cigarettes aren't pretty and one day your lungs will tell you so.
quit whilst your ahead.
I forgot the boy with the bright hair and I told tales
that date back so far I forget their names and I heard
my own voice like a echo of someone who I didn't recognise.
I'd show you a slideshow of how I fall apart at every hurdle
and tell you to run for the hills or
sooner or later you'll see for yourself.
Eighty years old, that's a big thing to the Chinese.
Eight in Chinese (ba) sounds like luck (fa), so any multiple of eight is a cause for festivity. My grandfather's eightieth birthday last year, for example, definitely warranted a special celebration.
And what better way to celebrate this than to go back to where my grandfather's life began, where his parents first met, where his grandparents lived their whole lives? And what more appropriate way than to have the whole family with him there?
But China, how I underestimated you.
No amount of Chinese tuition could have prepared me for you. For someone who had grown up being forced to stutt
for a moment, time stands still.
then the world comes rushing in. it's coffee-flavoured - bittersweet, with a hint of irony. it drenches them, frothing around their legs and curling its tendrils upwards until it covers their heads.
so they stand in their coffee-flavoured world, watching jellyfish float serenely by.
his hands are on the small of her back, hers are around his waist.
we need a camera, she says, staring round at the scenery.
look, he says. land.
their vessel of bare feet deposits them on warm crystals of sugar and they drag themselves upwards, bit by bit, ignoring the sickening sweetness that gathers in the pit of their bel
oceans spill over
onto the edges of our feet.
we climb flower stems
like rock walls.
picking the petals
and using them as parachutes
back down to the ground.
just breathe, love.
i will never stop hoping.
The rain started
last night
in the hours when the dogs
are all quiet, the moon spirits have settled
the hours when you wouldn't hear anything because
no one
would be awake enough to hear
so came the rain
in those unfortunate few hours
unattended, unwelcomed
in a silent dark rush
the first glimpse of morning was without light
unless the silver gray of the sky unfolding
can be called such
they danced vengefully upon a dazed, half-conscious earth
a flood indignant,
that for a few whole hours
no one could have cared
I joined deviantart to stalk someones poetry mostly :).
Current Residence: Beijing Favourite genre of music: Mellow Rock (my original genre name) Metal and different types of Rock Favourite style of art: poetry and photography Operating System: Mac OsX MP3 player of choice: Sansa Mp4 Favourite cartoon character: Calvin(from Calvin and Hobbes)
Favourite Movies
Little Miss Sunshine
Favourite Bands / Musical Artists
Coldplay, Red Hot Chilli Peppers, Bullet for my Valentine among others
I must confess, that when I was somewhat younger and full of emotions and easily wound up, I found it easier to write. Not saying that everything I wrote was of even passable quality, but the factory was in full swing, if you know what I mean.
Now I think, I'm not so easily choked up by heartache. The writing isn't exactly bursting out of my eyes. But maybe what I'm observing is not a causal relationship, maybe they're unrelated. What about all you literary folks out there, have you're writing patterns changed, over time?